Vids or it Didn't Happen #1

Constructive criticism is welcome, but all criticism will be accepted.

The dude in the gi would have been better if he were wearing Aikido pants?

No tapout gear would have been more apt.

Heh, don’t get too far ahead of me just yet, I’m still introducing character types. :toothy5:

There’s more coming?

A subforum for just one cartoon would be awfully silly, wouldn’t you say?

Weekly, yes, with surprises sprinkled in.

Uh, the “Vids or it didn’t happen #1” makes me think that there will be more.

My ass. Your nuts. Rodeo.

Not THAT kind of surprise. Different forum.

haha I think I’m the guy in the middle

Playskool People Pwnage

I’ll be honest, Airman Kai, it was great.

But… it could’ve used a little more cowbell.

Get out.

I don’t think this will be funny to any body not from Bullshido. And outsiders will just view us as nerds upon seeing this.

Hopefully this tiny seed will grow into a mighty oak!..in my pants.

Pm me any time for writing advice :smiley:

I don’t think it’s very funny.

Comic isn’t funny. The only constructive criticism I could give would be “get a better joke”, because that one is terrible and would be terrible no matter how it was told/drawn.

Also, if you can’t fucking draw better than a third grader, why the hell would you decide to make a webcomic? There are all kinds of formats for humor that don’t require you to draw; why would you choose one that requires you to do something you suck at? Even if this joke were good the miserable art would be a distraction, not to mention the fact that it’s basically cut and pasted talking heads with next to no use of visual storytelling in any way whatsoever. The only serious reason to do a webcomic if your art sucks is if you had a lot of jokes that required a visual medium to get across, but this isn’t even that.

Can’t wait to read “Vids or it Didn’t Happen #3: Die Darkman Die.”

What the ending should have been:

Karate Guy: bla bla bla

Black guy: See, I told you so.

White Guy: Ah, but we have one advantage Karate Kid didn’t have!

BG: What?

Next Panel consists of WG beating the crap out of KG. End.