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Haha, love the Naruto comparison. Excellent.
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It is developing very well, let me go through it tomarrow for any typos.
It is developing very well, let me go through it tomarrow for any typos.
You know I love you, right?
Hopefully not in the Sirc/MJS way. By the way is MJS at least over the age of 16?
No, in a manly platonic way, of course! You’re definitely asking the wrong person…
Okay, I’d really LIKE to post part 2/2, since that has the cites in it, but it’s giving me an internal server error. Maybe the cites have too many hyperlinks?? I’ll try breaking them into smaller sections…
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(1) http://www.megaupload.com/?d=46KOI1FL
(2) http://www.martialartsplanet.com/forums/showthread.php?t=56196&page=1&pp=15
(3) http://www.socnetcentral.com/vb/showthread.php?t=63051
(4) http://www.myspace.com/djdreamaker
(5) http://www.ninjutsu.com/rank.php
(6) http://www.ninjutsu.com/store/home.php?cat=102
(7) http://magazine.anipike.com/index.php?article=210
(8) http://www.narutohq.com/chuunin-exam.php
(9) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bujinkan#Ranks
(10) http://www.narutohq.com/shinobi-ranks.php
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And for my next trick I am going to switch the order of the sections placing the military section in the front. If my experiment works out the article will have more up front “punch”.
BTW I combined old section 5 & 6 concerning Ralpie’s military claims.
I figured if people liked the second version then we could worry about reordering the footnotes.
I dumped the revised text into your post. After the notes are re-ordered, I think its done.
As noted, I made some minor tweaks, a few grammar corrections, and a corrected the cites.
If/when this goes public, can we make sure to email a link to a few of the newpapers in Augusta, GA?
good stuffs.
My only suggestion is to modify the Preface slightly to be more negative about him, even remove it (add the text into the intro so that the Executive Summary comes first). My thinking is that Google typically shows the first text after the keyword (his name) and we’d want whatever Google quotes to be bad. But I’m not 100% sure if that’s how Google works.
I have no problem mailing this article out to Newspapers in this town. I’ll be happy to be spokesperson, though Asia is more qualified should he choose to volunteer. I’ll send him a pm.
Kidcatcher, I see your point. Perhaps that Preface shouldn’t be on the actual investigation - I was thinking that it might go on the main Bullshido.com page just above one of those “Read the Full Article Here” links…
Hi Once Lost, I took the liberty to place a bullshido card at the front of the article, and added information in two places indicating Ralph had been photographed wearing his “medals”
What do you think?
WOW! Remind me to never cross you guys!
A couple of corrections.
Ralph PMed me on MAP not on SOCNET. He only did this after I mentioned applying for OCS.
AIT means Advanced Individual Training and it needs to be made really clear that an infantry soldier would not go to AIT and would NOT make the mistake of saying he did.
We would like to use you as the contact person for the press release Asia, what are the names of the Newspapers in Augusta Georgia?
Looks good to me - I made a couple of little tweaks, corrected what Asia pointed out and changed this paragraph:
Hall’s claim to have attended AIT is another inconsistency, as an infantrymen would not attend that school or make the mistake of saying he had. Both NoMan, a poster on SOCNET (6), and Lord Asia have indicated that infantry soldiers go to OSUT, or One Station Unit Training, not AIT.
I don’t know many but the Augusta Chronicle is the biggest one. I am getting interviewed by the Metro Spirit, more of a weekly mag, tonight and might drop a hint at the Ralph Hall article. I think more pple read that than the newspapers.